Your lao writing is good ,but you using [vanna-yut ] on a word that's not soppose to be. You used [ mi-tol ] on top of word [ puak ] and [ thong-thyo ] are wrong, also [ sawat-tar ] and [ sa-art ] there are no [mi-ek ] on top of sawat and sa-art o.k.! One more word that you put [ vanna-yut ] at wrong spot on word of [ sa-art- kua ], you placed [mi-ek ] on [ kua ] at the top of [ tol-vor ] is wrong, it soppose to be on top of [ tol-kor ].
Using [ vanna-yut ] on [ u therng suan thay khong pha-yan-sana ton pha-yang ] o.k.
Your lao writing is good ,but you using [vanna-yut ] on a word that's not soppose to be. You used [ mi-tol ] on top of word [ puak ] and [ thong-thyo ] are wrong, also [ sawat-tar ] and [ sa-art ] there are no [mi-ek ] on top of sawat and sa-art o.k.! One more word that you put [ vanna-yut ] at wrong spot on word of [ sa-art- kua ], you placed [mi-ek ] on [ kua ] at the top of [ tol-vor ] is wrong, it soppose to be on top of [ tol-kor ].
Using [ vanna-yut ] on [ u therng suan thay khong pha-yan-sana ton pha-yang ] o.k.
Chau noi salokkok.
Thank you Chau noi salokkok for correcting my spelling. I learned how to write Lao language from an Internet for almost 2 years now as I didn't grew up in Laos and I was glad to see a kind person like you to have concern for me. May Buddha bless your heart .